2010年9月23日 星期四

The Moon Festival

Today is the Moon Festival. I did not go home because I have a class tomorrow. The weather is sunny. Maybe I can see the moon in the evening. Vivian, Catherine, Lisa and I go shopping in city. Lisa buys many tools for example, brushes, pigments etc. She spends much money. We eat food in the fast food restaurant after we go back to the dormitory to taxi. 
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  1. Michael Wu2010年9月23日 上午8:22

    Hi, Jessica: I am sorry that you didn't go home for Moon Festival. However, it seems that you still had a good time at CHU with your friends.

    When you write English, you should pay attention to the tenses. If you described something happened in the past, you have to use 'past tense'. Finally, the last sentence -- 'We eat food in the fast food restaurant after we go back to the dormitory to taxi." is not correct. You should check the usage of 'after'. The expression 'we go back to the dormitory to taxi' is not correct either.

    I am looking forward to your next blog. Take care.

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